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Originally Posted by oksens
Hey brattyfootgirls, here is my feedback.
Suggestions for improving the video:
1) you could begin with the two models dressed, for example Vanessa was great in the clip with Luna, with that business suit on and really high heels, this makes the comparison astonishing. Lizzy (or Luna) could wear a short skirt and a jeans jacket, this would allow Vanessa or JC to perform the lift by the collar of the jacket, both can do that without any problem.
2) A great plot would be with the lifter dominating the liftee, with the liftee first being mad at the lifter because she cheated on her boyfriend (or something similar), attacking the lifter but not being able to provoke any injure or pain. The lifter first being shy and then suddenly deciding to dominate the liftee beginning to lift in every possible way.
Thanks again for your clips, simply loving them! 
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I second this, but could you focus on cradle, front lift, side/hip carry, shoulder sit and shoulder rides, no piggyback or ponyplay